Alphysans's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[TIN - Ticking Remix]

This is just the original version with effects added over it.. It actually makes the drop unbearable sometimes.
Perhaps you should try to make a work from scratch and have it truly your own!

[La Campanella - Franz liszt - PlayG Rmx]

All I can say is that I don't understand why there is a 4/4 beat to a song in 6/8. I couldn't listen any further than the first 17 seconds. I'm sorry, but all I can say is to fix the technicalities.

[Rachmaninoff]

Pretty accurate for the most part, but I just feel like the beat could've changed in different parts of the song. With the beat being so static, it made the song less interesting. There's also a lot of clipping, which is when the audio is distorted by loud audio inputs, like when it has the falling chords at around 00:34 in the song.
I think being aware of volumes and changing things up a bit should do the trick. Other than that, great work!

[Fantasie impromptu techno]

I actually quite enjoy the just piece! It's fast, fun, and energetic. I also like the way you trimmed it. That was one thing that I caught and liked right away. The instruments are great as well.
All in all, good job!

[Wishing [Goodbye - EP]]

This song is so beautiful and endearing. The simplicity brings the laid back and thoughtful feeing. I love the melodies, piano and chords. This song makes me feel comfy and warm inside. Great job!

[Glockenspiel]

I like how interesting this song is, despite the severe repetition. It gets more interesting at around 1:20, and I think that chunk in the middle at 2:24 - 3:59 is my favorite part, followed by the build up before it at 1:52 - 2:23. That electronic melody that comes in is nice as well, because it adds a different colour to the piece.
I only have a few issues.
For starters, the repetition is... there's a lot. At the beginning for example, you keep building off of that single melody from the glockenspiel, but every new line that comes in just repeats. There's no variation or twist. That's why I like the slight variation to your glockenspiel melody starting at 2:39 that continues in the background till 4:31. What I suggest doing is moving up the E B G F# G up a third, like G highE B A B during the build.
The next little one that could make the ending a bit more interesting. Instead of having the bass note continue with the sequence E D C D when it's the gloken on its own, keep it at E throughout to make it feel more like an ending.
I still enjoy this song a lot. It's nice on the ears, and it's pretty soothing to listen to as well.

[The Scrap Boy OFF VOCAL]

Every time I listen to it, I don't know what to expect! It's an adventure, this song. I enjoy the spirit and the journey behind it, as well as all the fun sounds and instrument choices you have. Excellent work!

[23.3]

It's extremely repetitive, but the tune and beat make it nice to listen to. I actually like the sound of this one better than the other. Try making the structure in 23.2 with these sounds. That would sound nice, too.

OliveIce203 responds:

Yeah I know. I fixed it and I'm planning to reupload. It'll sound better hopefully.

[23.2]

Very easy to listen to; it has a nice chord sequence with a somewhat soothing aura. Good job!

OliveIce203 responds:

Thanks! You are the main reason I'm able to do this. With your support I can be somewhat as good as you I hope.

[Aurora (Original Mix)]

This song really pull at my heartstrings, especially at the drops. Beautiful chords and melodies. I really enjoy this one to an aurora borealis and back.

Lockyn responds:

too kind my good dude, thank you for the love.